Wednesday, January 23, 2008

sentences from worksheet

thesis statement - Due to social factors, cheating in the school system is at an all time high. 

topic sentence - the lack of academic integrity in the united states is staggering. 

topic sentence - morals and values play a huge role in a students ability to make good decisions in their academic life. 

topic sentence - there are many ways in which to deter students from cheating.

topic sentence - many schools have their own principals and procedures when it comes to cheating. 

conclusion - Many social factors play a role in a students academic integrity. the stress's of acquiring good grades with the pressure of their individual household values, will affect the students moral compass about cheating. it is time for people to take responsibility for their own actions and to stop blaming society for their own downfalls. the school systems should have rules and guidelines set in place so that it is extremely difficult for a student to cheat. 


1 comment:

smiley22 said...

Heyo!
First off, i thank you for your input on my topics and i definitely agree with you on the fact that scientology is too broad of a topic. Based on your sentences, i believe that your thesis could have been broader; more than just social factors have increased cheating. But, i do love your topic ideas; esp. the one about the overload in prisons. I can tell you're in the criminal law area.